Thursday, 10 September 2009

So this is how it is.

I don't know.
Do I?

I don't.

Do you?
I don't think you do...

Why?
Do you know?

You look away again.
You're not touching me.

What?
Did I do something wrong?

Do you still...?
I do.
Do you?

It's cold.
I miss you.
Do you?

I don't know.
Do I?

I'm unsure.
A hug?
Warmth?

What's that?
You don't want...?

Oh.

I didn't know.

I still don't know.

9 comments:

Anonymous said...

Somehow, that makes perfect sense.

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A fan

Anonymous said...

I like the subtle satire! Thats exactly how a clingy woman talks. Do keep writing

Anonymous said...

sorry. I mispoke. I just read your other pieces and now come to the understanding you are in pain.

Anyanka said...

Hahaha... This piece was intended to be satirical. Glad you got it.

Anyanka said...

P.S. - not really in pain anymore. :D

Kanasu said...

loved the piece.

Priyanka said...

I don't think that's how a clingy woman talks...clingy women don't talk, they whine. This is how anyone would think (probably only women say it out loud) when their relationship is definitely headed downhill!
So simple and yet it delivers the message, I really like it!

開心唷 said...

I love readding, and thanks for your artical. ........................................

明秋 said...

Always read stuff that will make you look good if you die in the middle of it.............................................